This article also appeared on the Southern Daily Echo website and on Paul's Shop Window on Wordpress:
With Valentines Day approaching, I’ve been busy updating the Romantic Quotes page of our website www.yourlifeyourstyle.co.uk. I introduced it to help inspire customers looking for words to go with their gifts. I  know lots of us find it difficult to put our feelings into words. So   often you end up with clichés or simply something that doesn’t really   express what we really feel.
Great poets have the ability to find  images and combinations of words  that get to the heart of our emotions  and make a connection with us.  Apart from Shakespeare who  unfortunately has become a   cliché, I particularly like e.e. cummings’  poem that begins ‘I carry  your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)’  and Khalil Gibran’s ‘Life  without love is like a tree without blossom  and fruit.’
The best song lyrics do the same when they’re not  rhyming ‘moon’ and  ‘June’. I love the way Ira Gershwin expresses the  way romantic love  combines little things, memories and the deepest  feelings:
‘The way you hold your knife / The way we danced til  three / The way  you changed my life / No, they can’t take that away  from me.’ But then I  am an old romantic.
Being romantic and  funny is the hardest challenge. The late Hovis  Presley had the Northern  talent for veiling deep emotions with humour:
‘I rely on you  like a camera needs a shutter / like a gambler needs a  flutter / like a  golfer needs a putter / like a buttered scone involves  some butter / I  rely on you’.
Even writers such as journalists or advertising  copywriters, whose  work is not likely to be remembered beyond the  weekend, have to emulate  the immortals by finding the right words and  eschewing   clichés if they want to make a connection with their  readers. The  greatest love of my working life has been writing copy but  sadly I could  never get near the genius of Ira Gershwin- or even Hovis    Presley.
I always enjoy copywriting, so if you need any help  with sales letters, press releases, website text or brochure copy, drop  me an email at admin@yourlifeyourstyle.co.uk.

 
 
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